Hitoshi Iāll give you points for originality and for writing a fanfic thatās actually legiable. Most fanfics that Iāve read are written in broken English. Fanfics arenāt really my thang I donāt really like them because a majority of them are just about characters having sexual relations. But you seem like a really good writer from what I read. I read the Drrr one about Shizuo and Izaya.....the one thing that was going through my head while reading it was a line from a abridged series of Free! It was this āThey hate each other but they also f**k each other.ā Iād say the only thing I had a problem with was the ending. I wonāt spoil it for anyone who wants to read it. Good job friend.